Feedback

Feedback:  

Here is some feedback that I received from a 15 year old girl who is also in the target audience of our thriller opening , after listening to her feedback of our rough cut I have realised some important aspects that should be changed in order to improve our final piece before being completed. I think it is important that music is added, therefore myself and my group are planning to make some music, this will be played throughout most of the short clip, however will be paused as the girl is revealed to create tension, as well as allow her heavy breathing to be heard enabling the audience to understand the fear she is experience and as a result to this creating empathy.