Monday, 17 April 2017

Feedback

Feedback
Here is some feedback that I received from another member of my target audience after they watched  my thriller opening ...


From watching this back I have realised both the positive and negative things about the thriller opening I created, I think that if I was to do this opening again I would put the shot when Rediola is revealed in slow motion in order to build tension and suspense as the audience awaits for the reveal. I also think that I would cut out the final shot of the girl , and add a longer shot of the car , this is becuase it would suggest she has died and therefore build tension. 



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